Nice fanficEdit
Very different from your other one:) It sounds sort of funny with all those "modern words" in there, but it's interesting to see how you wrote before. It would be cool if you could write a completely new story. Maybe a sequel to Alperion's Redemption?
Look in the fanfiction sandbox on my profile to see my latest. Ninja Hinder 19:59, 10 June 2009 (EDT)