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Decent enough story. Caius (Beautiful name, by the way) kind of turned for no reason. I'd like a better explanation.
Ninja Hinder 00:25, 13 June 2010 (UTC)
The reason for Caius' (yeah I know right? I love that name and was trying to find something to use it in.) "turning" as you put it will be explained in the sequel, but it is not anything natural, and some have know of it for awhile, as was hinted at in Part One of this story. Thanks for the positive response, and by the way, I am a huge fan of your fanfictions! Auri-El Reborn