can i add something for cheydenhall....it'll be decent...and i promise to spell the city name right. The Great Falcar 01:36, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
- Sure... I really kind of stopped doing this fanfic, I'm more focused on the other fanfics now.--Arch-Mage MattTalk 01:40, 23 March 2010 (UTC)
Small problem but didnt want to step on your toes (or edit you page you could say ;D)Edit
last part, "since I was" should be "since it was" when hes talking about being forced out of the arcane university. Mikeyboy52 02:18, 8 June 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks =) --Arch-Mage MattTalk 19:07, 8 June 2010 (UTC)
Interesting...Edit
This is actually pretty good. I never thought about it, but when I saw it on the Fanfictions page, I must admit I was intrigued. I wasn't dissapointed, either. Great job! Auri-El Reborn 19:26, 1 July (UTC)