ComplimentsEdit
Great story! :) A few typos here and there, but the story itself is moving.
Is there any way for people to get their stories into real Elder Scrolls games? Bethesda should run a story contest or something.
A SequelEdit
I have a sequel mostly thought out, although I can't decide on an ending. If anyone reads this story, please comment, should I do a happy ending or a tragic ending. ESQuestion?•Email•Contribs 05:03, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
Read and enjoyedEdit
I have just read through this first chapter of your Vampire's Tale series. As part of my preparations to write my own fan fiction, I have been reading other peoples fan fiction, such as yours, and getting some ideas about writing style. I appreciate that different people have different writing styles, and I want to highlight things in other peoples work that suit my own tastes. I keep my own notes as I read. My comments are for my own benefit rather than as critique, and I will no doubt refer to them as I begin writing my own fan fiction. You may find my comments about your fan-fic tale interesting. I look forward to the continuing story of Gallen and Jean-Pierre. Keep up the good work! – Daric↝talk 13:45, 23 January 2013 (GMT)