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6 July 2017
Shivering:Rotten Den
Zone 2: {{Linkable Entry|Rotten Den, Precipice}}: Awkwardness, revised for clarity, not everyone fights everything - New topic, new pp, 'if' without 'then' (twice) - missing colon, clarification of zone doors
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Shivering:Rotten Den
Zone 1: {{Linkable Entry|Rotten Den, Deadfall}}: clarification - clarification - clarification, cannot reach door at 'D' except from zone 5
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Shivering:Rotten Den
Zone 1: {{Linkable Entry|Rotten Den, Deadfall}}: word order, missing word - ':' for ';' - ', and' for ';' - passive voice changed to active - ', which will' for 'and' - 'and' for ', with' - incorrect use of commas - confusing, edited for clarity.
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5 July 2017
Shivering:Xirethard
Notes: applied code tags for console command: 'lock 99'
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Shivering:Xirethard
Notes: forgot summary for PREVIOUS EDIT: updated how access to Xirethard differs depending on whether the player chose Mania or Dementia in the main quest. In THIS EDIT: deleted 'ed' from 'opened' - italicized console command: 'lock 99' for clarity.
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Shivering:Xirethard
Notes
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Shivering:Xeddefen
Zone 5: {{Linkable Entry|Xeddefen, Fales}}: - missing comma - hyphen needed - missing word - replaced 'and' with ';' - 'Initially' implies this permanently closed gate can open, it is internally inconsistent with the paragraph above - hyphen needed
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