Skyrim talk:Mistman

Writing Needs RevisionEdit

They are the mages of the Cairn, and "compared to" .... does not really make sense, nor fit with how enemies are normally described, though it's easy to understand what's intended. I don't have better language immediately, but maybe someone can try re-wording, or I'll do it later. --JR (talk) 01:11, 21 January 2013 (GMT)