User Contributions
7 March 2020
Lore:Daggerfall Covenant
Tamriel Covenant: Use American spelling. And "realized" must have the correct referent (the plan, not the leaders). There's some over-capitalizing here, too.
+6
Lore:Reachmen
Punctuation, capitalization, and "Reachman" is better reserved for singular referents. Clearer cross-reference.
+16
Lore:Fourth Era
Third Century: make some of that read better
-16
Lore:Fourth Era
Second Century: Previous edit: I meant Yokuda, not Atmora. It's just "Red Mountain" not "the". Another "The" fix.
-4
Lore:Fourth Era
First Century: Don't overstate the case (Vvardenfell as a landmass was not destroyed, the way Atmora was). The invasion also harmed Dres; see the Lore:House Dres article. Re-word Orsinium bit. Fix redundancy.
+46
Lore:Morrowind
Architecture: more info
+640
Lore:House Dres
Grammar. Correct word. We already said that, just move attribution there. "Nicely" probably not a word to use in connection to slavery. And we already said that, too, in same quote. Use consistent plural format. Adril Arano's not a book title.
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